Showing posts with label wild. Show all posts
Showing posts with label wild. Show all posts

Thursday, 7 April 2016

The Women


Though the Borough of Camden has no forest,
when the moon goes dark I hear the call
and my heart feels sad for lack of women.

I unwind myself towards the women.
Like a thread, they pull me to the heart of the forest.
From the elder and hawthorn and birch trees they call.

I shake off the world as they send out their call
and clothe myself in the fire of the women
Together we dance in the deep of the forest.

From the forest they call, the women, the women.


Today’s NaPoWriMo prompt is to “write a tritina. The tritina is a shorter cousin to the sestina, involving three, three-line stanzas, and a final concluding line. Three “end words” are used to conclude the lines of each stanza, in a set pattern of ABC, CAB, BCA, and all three end words appear together in the final line.”
The repetition in this poetic form goes well with a movement towards something simpler, wilder, more primal. The first line locates us in the modern urban world. After that, the tritina takes us into a realm more like ballad and myth.
I wrote a second poem today, also a tritina, which you can read here. I wrote two poems because I don’t know if I will have the chance to write one tomorrow. Because I am going to the forest to join the women!

Sunday, 12 April 2015

The Gooseberry Girl


  I once cracked a glimpse
  of the gooseberry girl,
  lean in her tangle of twigs.
  A wild brambled thing,
  her eyes
  the colour of ponds.
  When I drew close,
  she rusted in my hands.

  Now there's a cabinet  
  filled with jars,        
  labels written by hand,  
  contents the colour 
  of moss and stone.
  Red stains my hands.
  My legs,
  cut with thorns of joy.



Today's NaPoWriMo prompt: Describe in great detail your favorite room, place, meal, day, or person. You can do this in paragraph form. Now cut unnecessary words like articles and determiners (a, the, that) and anything that isn’t really necessary for content; leave mainly nouns, verbs, a few adjectives. Cut the lines where you see fit and, VOILA! A poem!

When I removed the unnecessary words from my descriptive piece, I found a story began to emerge. I ended up re-inserting a few articles and determiners in service of this new story.